The Evils of Ivory Poaching

The Evils of Ivory Poaching
Thousands of pairs of tusks lay ready to be cut into fancy jewels available for purchase worldwide.

Ezekiel

All About Ivory Poaching

Hello, my name is Ezekiel. I’m 9 years old. I attend Excellence Charter School of Bedford-Stuyvesant. I’m writing you this essay because poachers in Africa and Asia are killing elephants just for their tusks. At first, I thought elephants were happy, that’s when I read the Endangered Elephants book. That’s when I decided to write this essay. Now I know elephants are almost extinct and we need to help them survive.

I am going to tell you amazing facts about elephant and their habitat. Elephants are cool because they dig their tusk and drinks with their trunks. If an elephant stay in one place for too long all of their food will be all gone. Elephants are being killed just for them to make jewels. A matriarch is a female elephant who leads its herd for protection. It also looks for food and water. I just told you amazing facts about elephants.

The issue I am going to tell you is about ivory poaching. Ivory poaching is when somebody kills an elephants just to get their tusks to get some money. And then they turn the ivory into jewelry. You should not kill elephants just for their tusks, it is not right. Ivory is made out of the tusks of elephants. Poachers are cutting off their tusks just to make jewels. They are shooting elephants with huge machine guns so many elephants are being killed that they are almost extinct.

You can help save elephants by calling the police. When or if you see someone poaching an elephant now that really doesn’t happen here in America but if you see a ivory sale, don’t buy any jewels. You can buy other jewels for example emeralds and rubies. Make sure it isn’t a blood diamond either. I just told you why you shouldn’t poach elephants just for their tusks just to make jewels.

In conclusion, I just told you why you should not kill elephants, especially for their tusks to make your fancy jewels. I hope you enjoy this essay! Remember, if you see an ivory poacher ARREST HIM IMMEDIATELY! Now, remember never buy jewelry from an ivory store, well at least ask what type of jewelry it is. If he says” Yes it is ivory,” don’t buy any of the jewels that they have for sale. I hope you took this as series as I did. I hope you enjoy this essay! And if you ever have any question you should links on our website!

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ezekiel-
I learned something from reading your essay. I never knew that elephants are matriachial. I think that is a very interesting fact.
As for the poaching, I definately take this issue as seriously as you do. You can be sure that you won't see me with any ivory jewelry (or blood diamonds). Thank you for writing such a powerful essay on behalf of the elephants.
Sincerely,
Ms. Genzlinger

Anonymous said...

Ezekiel,

This was written like a pro - good job!

Mr. Degner

Anonymous said...

Ezekiel,

If I ever see a person selling ivory, I will try to do a "citizen's arrest." But in the meantime, I will just refuse to wear or buy any jewelry. How's that?

--Mr. de Leon

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Ezekiel,
Great job!! Elephants are a lot like people in that they live in families and usually the "mom" is in charge. Elephants grieve over their dead like we do !! Maybe one day the elephants will be able to reach right into a poachers mouth and pull out his teeth !! Maybe then the poachers would see how awful they are!! How destructive they are. Elephants have fantastic memories too so poachers better watch out because an elephant that saw the poacher might go after him. I never will wear ivory or anything from an animal.

Anonymous said...

Zeke,

I am very impressed with your essay. You have written with such clarity. Hopefully your essay will wake some people up and help them see how amazing elephants are and how impoverished our world would be without these great creatures. Thank you for taking the time to write about such an important social issue. Keep up the great and important work.

Mr. Sawicki

Anonymous said...

Daer Ezekiel nice first parigraf.

Anonymous said...

Zeke-
I definitely enjoyed reading your essay! I learned some very interesting things about elephants. Thank you for bringing this social issue to my attention. I will never wear ivory jewelry, thanks to your essay.

Ms. Parasnis

Anonymous said...

Nice essay z

Anonymous said...

Zeke your essay is so nice iI can not explain
khalil

Anonymous said...

dear ezekiel I like your topic sentence. Lots of details. from BFF sef