Sef

Circus Work

Hello my name is Sef and I am 9 year’s old. And I go to Excellence Charter School of Bedford Stuyvesant. The reason I am writing this essay is because elephants are becoming endangered. And I think that is happening because people are working elephants too hard in the circus. So read this essay to learn what kind of things circus owners do to elephants. How they show affection ,and how they feel when they get taken away from their families.

The reason you should care about elephants is because they are the biggest land animals, they take baths together, they show affection, and sleep together. I mean they’re sort of like us. So if you kill them, it’s like you’re killing yourself.

Have you ever been to the circus before? Well it is not that fun for the elephant. Well if elephants don’t do a good job the owners will starve the elephants, whip them, and take them away from their families. But the worst problem is getting sent away from their family because elephants need to show affection or loving feelings to each other. The way they show affection is by wrapping their trunks together. And that is the way they communicate also.

So please don’t go to the circus because if you keep going, the circus owner will keep doing horrible things to the elephants and other animals. Don’t go to the circus because owners will keep getting money. Many circus owners take animals from animal preserves. An animal preserve is where animals live and no humans can go into their habitat. They have animal preserves so people won’t kill animals. Rich people can help this issue by giving money to charities that help animal preserves. And another solution for not going to the circus is going to the zoo, museum or the amusement park. But PLEASE DON’T GO TO THE CIRCUS.

In conclusion, making elephants work too much is killing them and making them become more endangered. And this concerns me because people are hurting elephants. So I hope you respond back to my 5 paragraph essay.